A lot of changes need to be remade to our script. We were on a time constraint and procrastinated so we kind of just threw something together between all of us. Now that we got our script back, I realized that a whole chunk of our plot is missing. Our script jumps from the beginning to end, leaving the entire middle part out.
In order for us to fix this along with all the formatting issues, I think it’d be best if we rewrite our script. The main thing I want to do is add more character development so that way we can build up the plot more. There has to be more scenes that show the character having a conversation, and showing the characters actions. Another issue was that we ended the story. To fix that we’re going to take away the ending and instead make a bigger build up to the ending, letting the audience infer what happened.
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